WALT use specific vocabulary to write a diary entry
I have learned it's easier to use interesting vocabulary from a brainstorm than from our heads.
Here are my best sentences:
Me and Duffy made 15 trips today with artillery, machine guns and rifles booming. After a rest at an Indian artillery unit we made our way back to the trenches.When I got back and ate some food and played cards.
I achieved my goal because we read books about war to help with our writing.
Next time I will make my sentences more interesting.
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